The gut-wrenching internal struggle which individuals
face when engaging a moral question can often be undeniably intense. This conflict only becomes significantly
magnified when that individual is of a firm religious background. I know that this is a true incidence through
my personal experiences. When I was
younger, I often felt that it was an undeniable necessity to bring forth punishments
according to the Law of Moses (“An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth”). However, throughout the years, I have been
influenced by church teachings which deliver statements along the lines of “Ye
have heard it hath been said, An eye for an eye, and a tooth for a tooth: But I say unto you, That ye resist not evil:
but whosoever shall smite thee on thy right cheek, turn to him the other also”
(Matthew 5: 38-39). Through such
teachings, my moral understanding has been altered and heightened, for I feel
that this religious study has shaped my being in such a way that I now have the
ability to grasp higher concepts. Of
course, religion is based around the field of Pathos, which the author uses in
his article to almost force the reader to listen to his argument. Along with this, he applies facts to his article
which serve to strengthen his viewpoint and hit a more personal tone in his
primary audience. The author also preys
upon a sense of guilt that might arise when considering the occurrence of Osama
Bin Laden’s death.
Despite creating intense and difficult statements
for many Americans to agree with, Patrick Clark creates a general argument
which many would find difficult to disagree with. The author first includes information that
appeals to his primary audience. He says
“should we consider it anything more than a blind coincidence that this
momentous attack was carried out on Divine Mercy Sunday?” This may seem obscure to some readers, but
for the intended audience of Catholics a point becomes struck home. Divine Mercy Sunday was created by Pope John
Paul II on the second Sunday of Easter in the year 2000. Its purpose is to recognize and celebrate the
divine mercy of the Lord Jesus Christ. The
author makes this connection in order to draw out the thoughts and emotions associated
with their memories of this holiday. In
doing this, he applies his argument to something that they are used to and
generally have respect for. This will
help the thought of mercy to in the conscience of his audience. This moral foundation is a way for Patrick
Clark to effectively establish his position in such a way that it will be
difficult for an argument to arise later in the paper.
I liked the fact that your introduction wasn't a snooze. It was super personal and made me want to continue reading! Good job :)
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